Sunday, October 31, 2010

THREE from
THE OLD POET SAYS


“Poetry,” he said,
“is in the ear (and

by God you've got two
of them) and in the mouth.”

*

“Practice hard
and play free -

poetry happens
when you're not trying.”

*

“The value of
poetry?

I don't know,”
he said.

“The sun comes up
whether I

write or not.”


Saturday, October 30, 2010

THREE from
THE OLD POET SAYS


“So, then,” they asked,
“why do you

keep at it?”
“I cannot,” he said,

“put the cork
back in the bottle.”

*

“Like plums,
sometimes

the weight
of poems

breaks the branch.”

*

“The blessings of travel
are many, not the least

of which is this
urge to poetry.”


Friday, October 29, 2010

LINES FOR OCTOBER 29
The window open to the day.
The day open to anything.



Thursday, October 28, 2010

LINES FOR OCTOBER 28
The darkness.
The begging

silence.



Wednesday, October 27, 2010

LINES FOR OCTOBER 27
Smudge of light
in the east -

morning sky and
remembering.



Tuesday, October 26, 2010

LINES FOR OCTOBER 26
No word like light,
breaking the eastern sky.



Monday, October 25, 2010

LINES FOR OCTOBER 25
In the mountains
crow rides the crazy wind,

no way else to go.



Sunday, October 24, 2010

THREE from
THE OLD POET SAYS


“The measure can be
anything, but must
be regular, some-

how. Irregular
measures are toothless.
You might as well write

prose.”

*

“Empty
your mind. Trust
it will

be filled.”

*

“You do not
believe in
darkness, nor

do you trust
the light. There
is not much

I can give you.”


Saturday, October 23, 2010

THREE from
THE OLD POET SAYS


“Why write
when there's nothing
to say but

Aha! and
Look at this!

*

“How to tell
exactly the truth

when truth is so
inexactly?”

*

“How full is this moment?
I will write you a book.
I will write you another one.”


Friday, October 22, 2010

LINES FOR OCTOBER 22

Whiskey-wind in my beard.
Somewhere the sun is shining.


Thursday, October 21, 2010

LINES FOR OCTOBER 21

River road, or river
in this high water?


Wednesday, October 20, 2010

LINES FOR OCTOBER 20

Mountain Lake
in Minnesota?
Mountain? As if.

Mountain does not even
put its foothills here.


Tuesday, October 19, 2010

LINES FOR OCTOBER 19

Wrecked upon
a lonely shoal -

hopelessness.


Monday, October 18, 2010

LINES FOR OCTOBER 18

The loneliness
of wind in

an empty tree.


Sunday, October 17, 2010

THREE from
THE OLD POET SAYS


“So many words
compete for nothing.”

*

“Gravity is
what undoes us.

Without gravity,
no time.

Without time,
we would be gods.”

*

“If you love
something,
set it free

and wait for it
to come back.
Try this test:

give me
your money.”


Saturday, October 16, 2010

THREE from
THE OLD POET SAYS


“I make notes as
fast as I can

and still the days
go flying past.”

*

“You not only need to
stay awake,” he said,

“you need to pay attention.”

*

“Water. Ice. Sky. Night. The stars.
What is it you don't understand?”


Friday, October 15, 2010

LINES FOR OCTOBER 15

Before landing on water,
the geese, dumping air.


Thursday, October 14, 2010

LINES FOR OCTOBER 14

Where
the tree was

the wind's song
unsung.


Wednesday, October 13, 2010

LINES FOR OCTOBER 13

The wind,
the lifting

of leaves,
the light,

the lightness
of things

this evening.


Tuesday, October 12, 2010

LINES FOR OCTOBER 12

Leaves falling like
an autumn sadness.

Monday, October 11, 2010

ALL OUR RELATIONS

J.D. Whitney, All My Relations. Many Voices Press, Flathead Community College, 777 Grandview Drive, Kalispell, MT 59901. 120 page. $16-paper.

Even a few words, perhaps, are too many when writing about these poems. As is usually the case with Whitney's work, these are spare poems, nothing wasted. And again, as is usually the case with Whitney's work, there is wisdom here, mixed with humor.

"All my relations" is an English approximation of the Lakota notion that we are brother/sister with all things, or "cousin," as Whitney would have it. Each of these 106 poems addresses a particular cousin with respect, though that doesn't mean we don't kill the feeding mosquito:

COUSIN MOSQUITO

I apologize

for interrupting

your

dinner

with death.

And perhaps we're not so wise as we think:

COUSIN LOON

We think you

sad

but

what do

we know.

Are these cousins red with tooth and claw? Yes, at times:

COUSIN HAWK

First the shadows of

your

talons

meet the mouse.

And what of our part in how things are?

COUSIN STUMP

Where

more of

you

once stood
I
sit.
Yes, these are short poems, spare but muscular. The poet's angle of vision is often not the expected one, so that - as with all good poetry - we see things anew. All our cousins are refreshed for us in Whitney's version of them. And in our new understanding we are refreshed ourselves.

I have been thinking for some time now that writing short poems is more challenging than writing longer poems, in that with the short poem there is nowhere to hide. Every word, every line is essential - like a pile of boulders, move one and they all fall down. Whitney's short poems succeed, no need to hide anything. Somewhere within them, something jumps and we say "Aha!" I would suggest that you read All My Relations and have a few "Aha!" moments yourself, as with this:
COUSIN STONE

I hear you

speak

too
slowly for
my
ears.



LINES FOR OCTOBER 11

Dried rushes
in the low ground.

Higher stands
the corn, ready

for harvest.
The sky is wide

enough for both.


Sunday, October 10, 2010

THREE from
THE OLD POET SAYS


“No,” he said, “I can't
write long poems

with these short
fingers.”

*

“No rule except the thing,
apprehension of the thing,
and rendering of the apprehension

exactly.”

*

“If I were
useful

I would be
a tin cup

near the water.”


Saturday, October 09, 2010

THREE from
THE OLD POET SAYS


“In the beauty
of this moment

either you want to
believe or you don't,

but there is no
not knowing.”

*

“Writer's block?
Skin yourself and sit.

Something will come.”

*

“Nothing like
ninety miles an hour
to clear the mind

and show you
what's what.”


Friday, October 08, 2010

LINES FOR OCTOBER 8

Except for darkness,
the stars.


Thursday, October 07, 2010

LINES FOR OCTOBER 7

Deer in the autumn field,
that color.


Wednesday, October 06, 2010

LINES FOR OCTOBER 6

Fog, down low,
where the sun

won't go.


Tuesday, October 05, 2010

LINES FOR OCTOBER 5

Hawk above
the hovering fog -

marsh and the
morning.

Monday, October 04, 2010

LINES FOR OCTOBER 4

Cranes -
the sudden

suprise.


Sunday, October 03, 2010

THREE from
THE OLD POET SAYS


“Breath is enough
meaning

for one poem.”

*

“It's not that you finish,
it's how you land.”

*

“Sometimes nothing
and sometimes

I understand the difference.”


Saturday, October 02, 2010

THREE from
THE OLD POET SAYS


“Some poems make you wonder
which shell the pea's under.”

*

“If you're not ready
and you're not patient

you've already
failed.”

*

“How long
do you wait
for inspiration?”
they asked.

“Until,”
he said.


Friday, October 01, 2010

LINES FOR OCTOBER 1

This
morning

the ponderous
fog

remembers
the sun,

remembers
the birds,

now gone.


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